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If this project ever reaches a phase where it has a real concept and a few screenshots, I might help with modeling and scripting. Until then, no way!

Bink Wrote:If this project ever reaches a phase where it has a real concept and a few screenshots, I might help with modeling and scripting. Until then, no way!

I made a new model its in the 3d model thread

kingdabura Wrote:

Bink Wrote:If this project ever reaches a phase where it has a real concept and a few screenshots, I might help with modeling and scripting. Until then, no way!

I made a new model its in the 3d model thread

Bink is everywhere. I am sure he already saw the model.
No need to answer to my post. Lets save webspace.

If this game gets to a good start, I could make a website for it.

One of my Creations: http://avisaria.co.nr

-Gandolf

Have fun with your cheesy homepage.
Gandolf, you need to learn a LOT. That homepage is built without any graphical know how. You should at least read a book about design.

/Edit:
• It's not allowed to use existing fonts as logos.
• Comic Sans is the worst font ever and even if you use it, use it as text, not as a pic.
• Text as a pic? You won't be able to change the content or copy text.
• The overloaded effects are hurting my eyes. Even though its way too dark. I can't read a s***.
• The page loads very slow, thats because you did not configure the graphics right.
• A professional does not watermark his logo. (It's not even from you!)
• You used huge images! Slows down as hell!
• You used too many different Fonts. Makes the whole thing look messed up.
• Every part is different, not ONE similar element on the page.
• Too many options in the navigation.
• [...]

Too lazy to continue. Hope this helps!
I hope it doesn't sound too rude. :/

Imon Wrote:Have fun with your cheesy homepage.
Gandolf, you need to learn a LOT. That homepage is built without any graphical know how. You should at least read a book about design.

/Edit:
• Its not allowed to use existing fonts as logos.
• Comic Sans is the worst font ever and even if you use it, use it as text, not as a pic.
• The overloaded effects are hurting my eyes. Even though its way too dark. I can't read a s***.
• The page loads very slow, thats because you did not configure the graphics right.
• A professional does not watermark his logo. (It's not even from you!)
• [...]

Too lazy to continue. Hope this helps!
I hope it doesn't sound too rude. :/

Thanks for the Critique.

• For some reason, Comic Sans just seems very appealing to me.
• The website appears different colors on different computers. Sometimes it appears lighter, other times it appears darker, but I do see your point. I need to get rid of most of the shadows, change the font, color, and make the background lighter.
• It is slow because I used iWeb to design it. iWeb saves the page in sections as .png and .co.nr really slows down the loading process.
• The logo isn't watermarked, I just stuck the text their manually to give credit to Deitritius (Part of Avisaria's Crew), I can take it off at any time.

Don't worry, I didn't find it rude at all, just truthful.

You have really opened my eyes. If you have any other suggestions or comments, they would greatly be appreciated.

-Gandolf

(Next time I edit the site, I will keep in mind everything you have said.)

You should learn html or CSS. It's advisable to learn html and xhtml before you learn CSS.

This is where I learn CSS and html. http://www.w3schools.com/

Gandolf Wrote:Thanks for the Critique.

• For some reason, Comic Sans just seems very appealing to me.
• The website appears different colors on different computers. Sometimes it appears lighter, other times it appears darker, but I do see your point. I need to get rid of most of the shadows, change the font, color, and make the background lighter.
• It is slow because I used iWeb to design it. iWeb saves the page in sections as .png and .co.nr really slows down the loading process.
• The logo isn't watermarked, I just stuck the text their manually to give credit to Deitritius (Part of Avisaria's Crew), I can take it off at any time.

Don't worry, I didn't find it rude at all, just truthful.

You have really opened my eyes. If you have any other suggestions or comments, they would greatly be appreciated.

Good to hear that.
Ok thats now offtopic, but a few suggestions more:
• Use smaller images. They slow down a lot too.
• A minimum of transparent PNG's. And IF you use them, only as small things like icons.
• The whole thing should be more uniform. (Similar colors everywhere, similar images, similar style)
• You should work on an imaginary raster for the proportions. You may heard about the Golden Ratio.
• Read a book! :P

Oh and I edited my last post! Take a look at it.

Strong Hammer Wrote:Did you write it or make it in a WYSIWYG website creator?

If you didn't write it then you should html or CSS. It's advisable to learn html and xhtml before you learn CSS.

This is where I learn CSS and html. http://www.w3schools.com/

Yes, I used a WYSIWYG website creator. I was thinking of transfering the Avisaria website to html to make it more flexible and easier to load. I have been to w3schools.com to learn VBScript and Php(Which I still find confusing) and that is a truly wonderful place to learn most internet scripting languages.

Imon Wrote:Good to hear that.
Ok thats now offtopic, but a few suggestions more:
• Use smaller images. They slow down a lot too.
• A minimum of transparent PNG's. And IF you use them, only as small things like icons.
• The whole thing should be more uniform. (Similar colors everywhere, similar images, similar style)
• You should work on an imaginary raster for the proportions.
• Read a book! :P

You have really inspired me to redo the website and make it all in html with less graphics and effects. Too bad Avisaria's progress is going slow. Satyricon (Partner) and I are waiting to get file protection on our graphics. So, before Avisaria turns public again, expect there to be a redone, beautiful website.


(We should probably get back on topic before anything negative starts happening.)

-Gandolf

I edited both of my last posts after you pressed the reply-button. You answered to my incomplete posts. Take a look at them please. My fault.

Yeah, back to topic.